Drafting my front cover

This is an improvement from my first draft. Firstly, I have moved the model down so it is easier to read the magazine logo. I still want to cover the magazine logo slightly because this is typical of most magazine cover. One thing that I need to change after my fist draft was the magazine font.
The font I used did not use look enough like a magazine. I have used a different font in this draft but I think this font is still not quite good enough.
One thing I decided I needed to change after my first draft was the gap between the selling line and the cover lines. Here I have made the cover lines take up more room but I have moved the selling line over. I don't think this looks good. The white on top of white looks wrong.  The main cover line looks interesting in red and yellow. I think I need to change the red because it doesn't look that good against the red top.  I have also improved this draft because the model is a bit brighter as she was in the first draft.







This is another draft for my front cover. I have improved it from my second draft because I have moved the selling line over a bit. I kept the main cover line in red and yellow. It looks a little bit better in this font. I think this font looks a little bit more like a magazine font.  The only thing I am not sure about this font is that it looks a little bit blurry. For a magazine cover it is important that the text is clear.